Prompt:
Over the past 150 years, every monumental discovery at Hopkins has started with a first step: The first draft by a Pulitzer Prize-winning author. A prototype that led to a life-changing medical invention. The first pitch that launched a new startup venture. As we commemorate the university’s sesquicentennial—150 years since its founding—we continue to celebrate first steps just as much as final achievements. Tell us about an important first in your life—big or small—that has shaped you (350-word limit).
Explanation:
New for this application cycle, this prompt invites students to reflect on a pivotal moment in their life that shaped the course of their personal trajectory. Given that students have the opportunity to share their world-view or values in their personal statement, this essay might be a good opportunity to share information about their intended academic trajectory by writing about a “first” that compelled them to seek further experiences related to their academic interests. It could also be a wonderful opportunity for students to shed light on the role they might play on campus life at Hopkins by writing about their past experiences in campus life at their high school. No matter what students choose to write about, the essay should shed light on a new facet of themselves not yet discussed in another part of their application.
With only 350 words, students should be discerning about how much space they devote to describing the “first” and how much they want to devote to a reflection about the experience. While admissions officers are certainly curious about the first you choose to write about, it’s critical that you reflect on the effect of the first on your trajectory: did it allow you to gain clarity about your intended academic path? Your values? How did you pivot as a result of this experience?
Aim to demonstrate maturity and growth in your writing, and—as with any supplemental essay—demonstrate how you align with Hopkins in your writing. If relevant in the context of your essay, write about why you want to pursue your goals at Hopkins rather than another school on your list. If there’s a class, club, professor, alumni, or any specific reason(s) why Johns Hopkins is the place where you’d like to foster this passion, this is your opportunity to write about it. The more specific you can be, the better.