I have helped students both in building their applicant profiles early in their high school careers and in articulating a compelling narrative through their applicant profiles when it comes time to apply.
For instance, one student I worked with had an interest in sustainability and environmental science. During her junior year, I helped her to source and apply to summer research opportunities—while there are plenty of prestigious programs in her field of interest, earning admission to a noteworthy academic summer program can be almost as complex and challenging as the college application process itself. I walked her through the process, and she was accepted and attended a rigorous program that took her interest to a whole new level.
But attending a program like this is only half the battle—plenty of students squander these opportunities by failing to continue their research independently throughout the school year or to engage in meaningful self-reflection after the conclusion of the program.
Some students engage in these activities solely as a line item on their college applications—Command Senior Mentors help students derive something truly meaningful from the experience that enriches their values and perspective. I encouraged my student to truly consider what she learned through her experience and apply her findings in tangible ways.
This paid dividends when it came to crafting her application. In her personal statement, she discussed the complexities of scientific research, touching on the ethical challenges and personal biases that can influence outcomes.
Likewise, her supplemental essay wasn’t just a generic statement of intent; it specifically highlighted the technical and methodological skills she had developed throughout high school, noting the research-based deliverables she had produced, and discussed how her continued work would benefit from and contribute to Cornell’s labs and classrooms.